Awwww Steven.. this is a really good Valentine's poem. That's been my Valentine's day, almost ever year! HAHA, man.. This one wil be different though :D

WOW! A wonderful write as always. A very heart wrenching poem. Great work :) Hope Valentine's is not like this for you my friend.

Great poem, diction and flow just flawless. I really enjoy reading your work!

I look forward to reading more!!

Kisses
Hayley

An excellent poem, my friend. In my humble opinion, Valentine's day is too commercialised now, empty, as your poem says. This is why I liked your poem as a criticism of society in a very subtle (perhaps, unitended) manner. Well done on an excellent poem.