Wow..... this is really great.... really very deep and full of meaning..... im guessing its a story about what wont give you the freedom you so desire..... i dont quite relate just yet but its getting there...... but anyways i did like this poem....

U now have my envy i wish i wrote this just wow btw perfect structure i was inturrupted while reading this and still kept it a flowin after i started reading again

Very nice poem

Well done on this poem, as in all your work it flows well, subtly entrancing the reader. I enjoy reading all of your poems, Hope to read more in the near future.
*VioletRaven*

Great job, but again I have noticed you have used "though" when it should be "thRough" ;) keep up the great work though