On this one rough flow and kept interest but i am giving 5/5 because it relates to me in some ways and i like that keep it up

That's the truth 5/5

This is a very deeply touching poem, and in reading it I can see how strong the emotions truly are. But, though I am someone of very little significance, I just wanted to say...The world will not be better off without you, no matter how much you think it's true, all it takes is for one person to disagree. I know that maybe you wont see that yourself, but just by being in the world you make a difference.
Though this is a very personal poem I found myself able to relate in ways. Beautiful and tragic, please keep writing.
*VioletRaven*

This is amazing! Sad and deeply moving, it captues my soul. I know how you feel, but life's beautiful if you look at it in a different perspective. Don't give up. We need good writers like you.

This piece is something many can relate to. It's written with so much honesty and openess. Well done.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

That almost brought me to tears, it hit that close to home. Its exactly what I've been feeling at the moment but just try to be strong, but on the sorry act and show for everyone. Nobody said life would be easy. Suicide is cowardice.

Anyway, back to the poetry. I wouldn't have this much to say about it if I didn't feel this strongly. It has a good solid rhyme scheme(if you could complicate it a bit it might sound better, then again it might ruin the effect) It was very well put togethor and well structured. An interesting title that reveals itself through the poem.

Great Work

Sondos

Wow soo deep.. but nice job (yet again.. ) plz do not do anything you will regret your poems are amazing and I love them so much this site would be a lot daker place without them.