by EoB Jan 27, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Thy blandishments, so riveting, |
EOB, |
I must say I'm impressed.I love the use of 'archaic' language/style, you make it flow smoothly and natural sounding so that it doesn't detract from the message and images.I also like that there is a slight ambiguity, allowing a more open interpretation to each reader.Mainly it is just worded so beautifully and constructed so well.I'll definitely be back to check out more of your work soon.Excellent poem, truly. |