Wilted

by Wings Of Flames   Jan 27, 2006


Glazed with sunlight and hung out to dry,
The hills green blade's begin to dance,
The miracles of life spread their wings to fly,
The smile engraved into your eyes left in a trance,

The sparkle of beauty tingles over her skin,
The traces of existence entwined in the tide,
The layers of thought never to sin,
Nobody shall ever see inside,

Whats hidden inside the doors of glass,
The surprise is yet to come,
The meadows of the swaying grass,
The raging fire and weight across they begin to strum,

The peace and harmony wilts between her teeth,
Calling of the rage belows across the peak,
The lillies petals falling along a sacride sheath,
My happiness left for minds to speak.....

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  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    A great peice. it really captures the reader at the beginging and maintains this interest thoughout.

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Ok emma, i'll be honest with you coz we are friends and it's my job. i'm very jealous of your amazing talent in writing poetry. thought you should know : ) this is another wonderful poem. cya wednesday,
    Suzie
    xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Cries at Night

    I like this!
    its working well, but i think that "the" is used far too much to start a sentence.

    but other than that, its flawless!