Wow you have a great use of words
very good poem keep writing
love always
tabby

Ahh, I'd like it better if you'd put some spaces between the sentences.

It's very good, and I can't complian anymore.

~Atomic

This is very interesting. but i kinda got confused but maybe that's your writing style to have it make it so interesting. Very amazing job i would have to say. I like how at the end how it was like how could you come when you never did at all. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow... i really liked this... you did an amazing job and it is so well written... keep it up

sammie

Great poem.
Loved it so much.
LoveAlways
NerdyPants

The words you use just take your poems to another level. I really enjoy reading your work.

Brillent man, I know what'cha mean in the last two lines, people under estimate that feeling sometimes but that was a great poem man

Exquisite use of wording, I loved it. Excellent work, you have talent

Wow, this poem is really good. it makes you think. 5/5.

You should definately get your poems published.. I wish I was as good as you... Keep up the amazing work..

Hey I love this poem also. I really like it. And I like the same parts as Kristen did. I'm sorry that I don't have much to say,

But I think if you put line spacing between every two lines, you're poem will be easier to read, and having the effect of making to look longer than it really is. You should try it.

I liked it. You are a be ry good poet! I loved your usage of words, I haven't read one this good in a while! I would say though, that you may want to improve on flow a little bit. Over all it's very nice! Keep it up!

I also realy enjoyed that poem. you have talent keep it. 5/5

thanks for sharing
take care
shannon

Great work. I loved reading it. Im glad you told me to read this one. keep up the amazing work

~Juls~

I can see this in my head; nearly every line does justice. Maybe you will be the few on my favorites list. Interesting...

Very well wirtten, I liked it. personally think there shouldnt be any gaps between each lines. well done.

Wow. Different kind of structure then your use to seeing. All the second lines rhyme yet have no relation ship to the first. Great vocabulary. Its a poem thats make you stop and actually read to absorb the beauty. Great job!

Wow really beautiful. I think I'm going to read some more of your poems when I have the time. They're really good. I especially loved the last line. I would say you're talented but maybe you hear that alot already. Nothing much more I can say.

'How could you leave when you never came!'

Progression from nature to emotion was great..the poem and especially the last line was wonderful. 5/5

Great write! That word, 'halycon' that's one of my vocab words for AP English lol