Papercut Valentine

by Kim   Jan 27, 2006


Dull white paper stars
Hang by strings from painted night
Silent imposters
Who've never hid from morning light

Crocheted figurines dance with
Superficial emotion in their eyes
With skin made of threads
And lips made of lies

The droning of a love song
Acts as a calming lotion
To those who breathe and move
With this articial motion

Sweet meaning exists not
In these commercialised of times
And I have no choice but to stay
As your papercut valentine

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Truely impressive mastery of language, I love the imagery you use in this poem, stunning 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by kim kilner

    Wow, some originality. i really like your style, youve taken a predictable subject and really given it a new approach. well done and keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Nicely done, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Deep poem! Touching and heart wrenching. Wonderfully written :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhhh my, I love it. Well done Kim, aren't you glad I made you join :P
    Tonight is our show!!!! Migzz and I were downtown yesterday, and we left a nice message on Speaker's Corner, I hope it gets aired!!! ... Brilliant poem!

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