I like it, keep writing.

That is really good, i love it.

Awesome poem hun! thanks for the comment, it means so much :D stay strong and take care,
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Hey this is excellent. i'm just gunna leave you with a tip. all that matters is the ending. keep that in perception while writing. keep it up. love leah xox

Great poem nice flow 5/5 keep up the good work