Awww thats was really sweet and sad, i love how you write, xoxo Rach

Wow that's emotional! I loved it though..it almost made me cry. keep writing! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Full of despare and wonderful ?'s for love always makes people do crazy things. keep up ur beautiful talent

-faithfulserneity

This is a very sweet poem. and i really support the main question of your poem. i personally think every one is born to save some one and everyone will die to save some one, well i think ur poem is awesome and yet very sad

keep it up

Take Care

LoTA LoVen,,

T!FF@N!

Aww wow, that sent tears to my eyes, it was so beautiful. I really loved it especially the last part.

ness xxx

I liked every bit of the poem and it is very very good its better than mine 5/5