Nicely done. i like this one. some great word play in this piece. i particularly like the line:

"...Slipping back into the desolate calm..."

beautiful imagery. very well done. keep it up. -hannah

Very strong imergry and overall a fantastic eice

5/5

Excellnt poem..nice rhythm and flow..my suggestion would be that you could of done this poem in the Nature Category..5/5 great job
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

I really enjoyed this poem. I love the imagery in nature poems, you did an excelent job in it. I liked your description in this, "glitering sand" creates this really cool imagery of a ceach and the glittering is glass and stuff like that. I liked how you described the sun as dying, this is a different way to describe how night is coming and the sun is setting. You really captured that beautiful image of the sun setting. An excellent job. To impr9ove i suggest you useo unctuation. Other then that a great read! Keep writing! xx

=D loved it!
well done an amazing poem!
keep up the hard work!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I really like this one, it is short but still very powerful, you created effective atmosphere with just a few words and rhythm of this piece is great. Well done!