by Brigitte Jan 27, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Children’s laughter rings out like belles, |
by PS
I like it. i love the message as my dream is to be 10 again. lol. no but i love the imagery and stuff. especially the snow and teh dirty. that was good. some of it had some flow problems. but overall good job. |
by Minkus
I don't know how this poem doesn't have a five from everyone that's read it. It's absolutely amazing, I can get the feeling so well that I feel like I wrote it myself. Great job here. |
by The Wingless
I like this poem, but on first sight I sighed that I had decided to read a fairly large clump of text, I like the content of the poem, which I forced myself to read, and I ended up realizing that this poem is better than it looks on first sight. |