by silhouette fairy Jan 27, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
As i lay here crying |
Thi sis another good peice, you tell the story very clearly with a good structure and choise of vocab. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I like it, you're poems are pretty good. Keep up the good work! |
by Erika
Wow that's great, i really liked it. I can totally relate, keep it up! |