by silhouette fairy Jan 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You, I've been longing for |
by IfIhide11
I think this poem is perfect. You did a Lovely job. Keep up the good work. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I like this poem, but in my opinion I think you've overused the words " you, I've been longing for" and " you, the one I'm longing for." Thats just in my opinion, but yea I liked it. Keep writing. |