I like it charlie!! your a good writer keep it up! i know what you mean about the wholei never thought i'd think of you this way not after the way you treated me!! its like hello he hurt me sooo why do you still like him he broke your heart!! but for some reason you do!! nice work on this one!! hey come come it says copyright ?? have you gotten them published>>

Good Poem...I know how it feels to be "mindless" 5/5

Arooj this is so good! makes a lot of sense, and i know how u feel...
take care , ur js gettin better everyday. :)