Wow awesome poem i love it great job

love always
tabby

p.s. congrats
on 2nd place

Excellent job, great ending. Keep it up

Wow that ending took me for a loop lol good job

I have some poems along this line and you really wrote it brillantly. I was actually surprised with the ending, surprised because I didn't expect it the person to be herself and I really loved the way you put that it. I can't complain about this poem, it was bloody Brillant!

-Tainted Mikochan

Love the rhythm and the rhymn..awesome way to portray this poem. :)

Lissa

Oh wow, This is a great poem, I had to read it threw a second time to realise that the person was herself. Thats amazing, Very unexpected. Excellent work. Keep it up. 5/5
Bec xx

Great peice, very powerfully written. the ending is very good, nice little twist there which realy hits the reader well and was genuinely unexpected.

5/5

One thing I love about all your poems (or at least those I have read so far) is the very last line...your closing lines always have such intensity and prominence from the poem and are used so cleverly. Beauty of a poem...keep writing!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

As the above post, thats one thing i love about your poems and also you are so expressive wheich is really neat.
Tara-Kay