Aw hun this is beautiful, very well written i loved it a lot, you're a very talented individual take care,xxoo |
I like this poem keep up the good work 5/5. |
Oooh...i know who diz is for...and i think its soooo cute and it must have hurt to write but u just had to...lolz..well i been busy lately...gettin into big fights with this girl..solangel...miguelz girl...i think i told u bout it...well she claimin dat he love her more den me...and blah blah blah...i'll tell u da detailz |
by dora
Aw a t0uching piece darl. i liked the structure. very well written. |
by Dianna M Tuohy
Very lovely poem. I'm going through something like this myself, actually. |
by Luciee
WOW. omg this is like my heart written down by sum1 else truely amazin how sum1 cud write and feel the same way i do ! if u eva need 2 tlk im here... truely lost 4 words !!xxxxx |
by Megan
Wow that was amazing! very good. this reminds me of one of my friends..exactly keep up the great work. take care |
I love this poem!!! It really relates to how I felt for one of my friends and my exboyfriend! Keep em coming! :) |
by brandi
This poem is really good. I think that if this was to be put into a contest you could make first place. |
by brandi
This poem is really good. I think that if this was to be put into a contest you could make first place. |
by Mandy
This is a sad poem...trying to let go is hard..i know:( well great poem, i loved it |
by Heidi
Good job, melissa.! thanks for the comment on my poem. Your poetry is so fun to read, and so well written. every one of your poems has a uniqe thing to it, and it makes the poem amazing. great job. |
by Valeria
GREAT>! JOB..! really good.. sigue pa' lante nena con la mirada en alto ...u are realy talented..! keep going ..! love always valeria..! u can send me a private message if u want to talk .. |