by Weeping Wolf Jan 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Something in you i feel |
WOW!!..u get better by the poems...this isi amazing...i love it..different kind of poem..i love it!! bbe ur amazing..stay strong |
by Z
You freakin' rock. |
by Ariana
Nice piece, it almost sounds sad to me, as if you are in love with this person almost against your will. I think repeating some of the ideas worked well and I quite liked the line 'beauty dressed in rags' it stood out to me. Well done :) |
Reminds me of someone i know |
I really like this... |