Feel

by Weeping Wolf   Jan 27, 2006


Something in you i feel
something...so real.
something in your eyes
that makes me smile and cry.

feel the water on your skin
hiding under the surface
as you dive in to swim
feel the smoke on your face
as you take another drag
remember me in this place
beauty dressed in rags
no one else can feel it
no one else will ever know
the sweetness in your eyes
by all the pain you show

you walk out all in black
your mother never knows
where you go at night
is it so bad to lose yourself
to drugs, parties and pain?
You speak to me like its ok
how you live life the wrong way

I just want you to feel me
in some small caring way
give me a pencil to rewrite
the old things i need to erase
I need you to redraw your life
feel me...I'm here...

feel the water on your skin
hiding under the surface
as you dive in to swim
feel the smoke on your face
as you take another drag
remember me in this place
beauty dressed in rags
no one else can feel it
no one else will ever know
the sweetness in your eyes
by all the pain you show

I feel the tears on my skin...
as you fall into me and give in...

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  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    WOW!!..u get better by the poems...this isi amazing...i love it..different kind of poem..i love it!! bbe ur amazing..stay strong

    luv ya lots

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    You freakin' rock.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Nice piece, it almost sounds sad to me, as if you are in love with this person almost against your will. I think repeating some of the ideas worked well and I quite liked the line 'beauty dressed in rags' it stood out to me. Well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    Reminds me of someone i know

  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    I really like this...