The green eyes ,
Thefirst time I saw them ,
I will never forget.
I knew it was love from that moment on ,
her hair of red ,
her lips of pink ,
everything about her made me think.
The things we said,
the love we had,
We wrote notes that made us laugh
and notes that made us cry,
Skin so smooth,
lips so soft ,
The love we had was oh so sweet.
Then she left,
I fell apart,
She went to college,
I went to fight.
Letter everyday,
Then one,
Then two,
Then no more.
Time has passed,
I must move on.
But everynight,
As I sleep,
The eyes of green,
Still make me weep.
Any comments on how i could make this poem better would be wonderful.
