Awwww hun i'm sorry and I hope life does turn around for you, love ur poems hang in xoxo Rach

I feel the same way too but im hoping that i will gradually get my old life back but its hard great poem 5/5

Awww great poem. your v.talenetd!
stay strong
love jess XXX

Aaaawwwww rachel hunni this is so sad ur gonna make me cry....i luv ya lots

Hey, Great poem, Although it helps the reader if you divide it into different parts... for example:

A girl hides her pain
from everyone around
trying not to cry
wishing pain would magically fade away

Everyone thinks she is ok
no one knows how she feels
The chaos in her life is overwhelming

Awesome poem =).. very emotional! this is a very good poem expressing how it feels to be alone and depressed you captured it perfectly great job keep it up ! =)

--emotionless.19*

Wow...excellent...i can really relate to this.

Wow, i can reallllllyyyyy relate to this one. i wonder that all the time, where the life i use to have went wrong.
~*Katherine*~

Great poem. deep and full of emotion. it made me cry a little. keep it up and thanks for the comment.

-rachelღ

Very sad poem. I like the emotion created in it. I wouldn't say it's your best poem, but it is very good. =]

Beautiful poem XOX. Love the last line.
5/5
♥
~Stephen White