Can you see me?

by Nil   Jan 28, 2006


Can you see my smile cracking?
my mask being ripped away?
didn't you see me glare at anything
that just so happen to look my way

Didn't you see my invisible tears
Falling from nights before
Can't you see my bloody legs?
Burnt, raw and sore?

Can you hear my screams
so cold and hoarse
When you look in my eyes
can you see all my remorse?

If you heard my screams
and saw my blood and tears
Then maybe i wouldn't be gone..
I'd still be here..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    This poem is realy good. I knwo how that is. I like how you put everything. Maybe if you let someone read your poems all your screams and blood and tears would become clear to everyone who read them. anyway great poem 5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Beka

    Love, love, LOVE this
    ~ ~ ~ Beka