Plea from the Drowning Girl

by Samantha   Jan 28, 2006


Plea from the Drowning Girl
(Living in the Reality of a Delusion)

So I can't sleep tonight,
But it's fine, it's alright
Cause I don't want to dream, anyway
And I won't wake up and be okay.

I'm still living at a constant 4 am
I can't figure out who I am
I just want to see the sun one more time
I just want one more day while you are mine

Let me forget that tomorrow will change
That my life will never be the same
And you are not my everything
Let me pretend that I'm not in pain
And my soul is not a dying flame
Let me lie awake.

(C) Samantha Tulgetske

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like it, it's quite original. Though, my dreams are better than my reality, so I rather sleep. I loved the end, specially "Let me pretend that I'm not in pain". It's true, sometimes all we want is to pretend for a while, sometimes even forever.

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Perpetual morning feeling, maybe lightheaded... your head swimming... ive been there. the poem was ok, maybe a little short but fairly well written, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Ooo nice. i like. esp this: And my soul is not a dying flame

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    "I'm still living at a constant 4 am
    I can't figure out who I am"

    This was a very interesting rhyme, I liked it. The poem itself was short, but it was pretty good for one of the many short poems that I have read. I liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Great job! i really liked it. 5/5*

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