I love it...excellent job..i like your detail in words and everything nice job
5/5
but my one advice to you is this....
try to make your poetry in stanza's..some viewers hate poetry written like this, and that leads to down voting...and also try to make a little ryhme..poems that dont rhyme are fine by me there great but there are some people out there who hate it and will down vote it....
im just tryen to help u out though