Barren Land

by End Of Eternity   Jan 28, 2006


Right in the middle of barren land
alone with my tears i stand
thinking of the time i had

sometime back, with me, i had you
now i wonder, if you know, what i am going through
if you could tell me, with this life, what should i do?

i know, time changes everything
& now i realize, what i meant to you
yeah that's what i was, just a "thing"

soon you will realize, the real me
drown in your own eyes, with regret & misery
hoping if you could undo the moment, of setting me free

just a matter of time, till you understand
how it feels to be in the middle, of a barren land
where alone with my tears, i stand

if releasing pain could have been so easy
if behind every smile you could see
then you might not have to search for the real me
or live the way i live with regret & misery
wonder if this pain would ever set me free

set me free

as my tears
touch ground
i see so many of me
growing around

right in the middle of barren land
alone with my tears i stand
thinking of the time i had

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Excellent job on this sad piece you have penned. The loneliness and sadness cry from your words.

    right in the middle of barren land
    alone with my tears i stand
    thinking of the time i had

    You are not alone yaar I am always here for you.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great one Nithin. so sad and so powerful.

    great work, good luck and keep writing

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    'as my tears
    touch ground
    i see so many of me
    growing around'

    Wow... amazing lines yaar. Absolutely breath taking. Your poems always leave me speechless and I forget my adjectives. lol.... anyways, excellent work once again. I dont know what else to say, I truely am speechless.

    By the way, you're not alone there in the barren land, if you look closely, you will see me there. :-)

    Love and best wishes always
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Omg, the pain and loneliness felt in this poem is amazing.. WOW.
    well, this is different from your other poems. good job
    Monique

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wow... Ok, so this is where you r spending all your time... writing dark poems...

    I loved it all the way through...
    love melting in pain... nice work...

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

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