Comments : The House

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    How angry were you when you wrote this? Or were you just listening to bad music?

    Anyways, either way, it's amazing, kind of short, but amazing.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Well you've won my interest Tay, this is a perfect poem to start us off with =) I enjoyed this:

    Turn off the courage, and turn off the lights
    Hide in the corner of the blackened room
    Relive all of your fears and hatred

    I look forward to Many more works from you =)

    Always inspired
    Jenn