by Bill Turner Jan 28, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Light emitting from a distant room... |
That was stunning, so well articulated and amazingly expressed. 5/5, keep it up! |
by Dianna M Tuohy
I like the images this poem conjures up, as well as the feelings it invokes. It's well written, and the vocabulary is used well. Very well done. |
by Simon Hayes
Enjoyable my friend... Hate, a wonderful subject to convey in a poem (Well it is when you do it). Superb writing Bill... More of these to come? |
by Katz
That was very thrilling to read! well done! |
by Phoebe
Great ^^ |