This poem is truely amazing!! I hope everything works out for you.. I love how you really put your heart into it.. This is certainly a 5/5 Great job!!! |
by Emma
I loved it. the best part to me was.... |
by Cari
Great job! i loved it. its really full of emotion... nice work!! 5/5 |
by Ruthie
Loved it! really goooooood work! |
by Loulou
This is an awesome poem you are a wonderful writer and i am gald you are on this website i enjoy reading more from you so keep writing |
Your sentiment was delivered with a flawless flow |
by obsessedgurl
This poem has a unique style that I love! |
The feeelings are very well conveyed and the poem flows really well |
Hey this is really good, I really liked this...thnx for commentin on mine...u did real good...keep them comin... |
by Katie
Exactly the point im at right now......i love it |
by Jonathan
I had to read the second line twice but then I understood what the idea was. The rythm of the poem is very good. overall a good poem. |
Honest sentiment with a nice flow |
by Lexie
Different poem, but i really liked it. Good Job!!!! It's good to know that people can still be friends after a breakup. |
Great poem. i'm glad you can still be friends with him. i know some people who make that impossible. 5/5. |
by Hareem
Nice poem, I like it all but the 2nd line in the last stanza...well the purpose of that question is too vague, I'd say. |
by The Wingless
Yes this poem is good. You had a different rhyming scheme. I love it when people stray from the rules its the best thing in the world. I don't really know what to say I really liked this poem. I read it a few times. But I have to admit, it was a struggle, because I absolutely hate the color scheme of the friendship section, it really reminds me of barf. |
by Newbie
Wow. i ADORE IT. hahaa. well. *blushes* am i allowed to take it and try to put music to it? its really beautiful. hahahaha. and .. just felt lik asking ur permission first xP but its realli realli nice. 5/5 |
by Alex Marlatt
Wowzers (haha I hate that word) I liked that, I would stay friends with my x's... if I had one... |
by *~*Gina*~*
I loved it, i can tell it came fom the heart. I really hope things work out. Thanx for commenting on my poem. I hope to see a lot more of your poems. ur a great writer! |
by Always4You
I thought it was wonderful. I love the way it flowed together. Sometimes I have problems getting mine to rhyme just right. Can you read through some of them and let me know what you think? It would be highly appreciated! Thanks! |