by The Poetic Child Jan 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A kid walks down the street |
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by Peyton
Wow i've read all ur poems and they r FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can u plz comment on mine and tell me how i could improve? emeil me. |
by Ian brennan
Awesome job man its really sad but it really expresses itself so good job |
by Always4You
That was great! You are an excellent poet...Keep it up..Your work is amazing!! |
by Tasha
Thanks a bunch for commenting on my poem. And I do really like this poem, your other ones were good too, but this one is my favorite. I love how it is a story kind of. |