That was great. I thought it was about some poor broken hearted boy. Good Luck for whatever may come. Hope to see more work soon. Johrden

Wow! Did this actually happen to you? I am sorry if it did, and i guess that i can kind of relate. Where you just give someone your heart when you find that no one even cares about you? It is really hard, but if i can get through it, then so can you! 5/5, keep up the fantabulas work! (Fantabulas is a word that my teacher taught me! Since i nick named her Ms. Ker- Pollo!)

Thank you for your comment on my latest poem, I have to say I was equally impressed with yours here. I know alot of teens who feel the way you do, only they cannot express it the way you have. Keep writng, It was apleasure to read your work. Thanx again, Timothy r

WOW like the way you presented this poem...excellent as always.

LISSA :)

This is really good poem. Thanks for rating my poem

OMG!! i just loved it--your an awsome writer
keep up the good work
looking forward to reading more

--Binks--

Damn u write such great poems hun, keep it up 5/5

Hello there, First off, thanks for the comment, and secondly your poems are amazing! I literally sat here for a half and hour reading one after the other.Keep up the good work i plan to come back and read the new ones :]
5/5

Your Poem Is Gr8! I Luved It! Full Of Emotions! Your So Talented! I Hope Your Heart Heals! Anyway Your Poem Rox!

Luv,
*LuvYou2Death*

You are an excellent poet, this coming from a fellow poet. I still love this poem because i can relate, and about your comment about not being able to comment on my poems because you have commented on every single one, well, you didn't comment on a war was faught! I still lovethis poem!

The way you express yourself is awesome! It's refreshing to know that guys really do understand pain & aren't all "macho" or whatever. definately a 5/5! keep up the good work.

There was some bumps for flow but overall excellently done. That is a great poem.
~Unforgiven

Thanks a bunch for commenting on my poem. And I do really like this poem, your other ones were good too, but this one is my favorite. I love how it is a story kind of.

That was great! You are an excellent poet...Keep it up..Your work is amazing!!
~Always4You~

Awesome job man its really sad but it really expresses itself so good job

Wow i've read all ur poems and they r FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can u plz comment on mine and tell me how i could improve? emeil me.

:)