Aww this is cute....great poem!!!

::MELI::

Wow you outstand me Bill!! excellent job

love always
tabby

I'm speechless Bill....you have a tendency to do that with your beautiful words...great job....

This is a beautiful poem , it was so lovely to read , well done bill.

The lines
I give you my heart
Asking you to hold my soul

are so beautiful. great piece of poetry!

good luck and keep writing

I am honest enough to say that your poems seem to get better each time I read one. I adore the last stanza of this one. There's some pretty wonderful work here, Bill.

Hey there,
I just wish to let you know that I love this poem. It truly touched my heart... I love it! Great poem my friend, always take care and keep it up. You're great (I mean it)...hugs. ^_^

Amazing write Bill... A truly beautiful piece!

This is so beautiful.......
good job dear......5/5

Bharti

So very, very sweet. (A few hot moments in there too.) Nicely done, and I love the creative title:)

Breathtaking!

Very touching well done

Nicely written. lets me think of things a little more

Wonderfully imaginative write Bill, great job!!!