by melly xx Jan 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
It was a chilly September night, |
by LadyPearl
Great job, a bit humorous too. The poem painted a nice portrait. Some of the rhymes did sound forced though. Keep it up |
by Robie Lincer
Hey thanks for comenting on my poem it means alot 2 me, n thanks for correcting it, i will fix it later, and ur poem is good its nice, wen i read it i felt soo warm. |
WoW what a cute poem....i like it 5/5 |
by Christine
Really good:D 5/5 |