First Kiss

by melly xx   Jan 28, 2006


It was a chilly September night,
as we held each other tight
gazing at the stars in the sky,
it was so cozy, just him and i.
for my hand he had reached,
as we sat there at the beach
We looked into each others eyes,
and thats when i realized,
that falling in love was not a sin.
and as he leaned in,
i tried not to miss,
i wanted it to be perfect,
my perfect, first kiss.

© MLS

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job, a bit humorous too. The poem painted a nice portrait. Some of the rhymes did sound forced though. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hey thanks for comenting on my poem it means alot 2 me, n thanks for correcting it, i will fix it later, and ur poem is good its nice, wen i read it i felt soo warm.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dino Dhamphyr

    WoW what a cute poem....i like it 5/5
    keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Really good:D 5/5