Really good:D 5/5

WoW what a cute poem....i like it 5/5
keep writing

Hey thanks for comenting on my poem it means alot 2 me, n thanks for correcting it, i will fix it later, and ur poem is good its nice, wen i read it i felt soo warm.

Great job, a bit humorous too. The poem painted a nice portrait. Some of the rhymes did sound forced though. Keep it up