IRONIC pt 1

by ~Fallen Angel~   Jan 29, 2006


Life is ironic
In it's cruel way.

I hated moving to a new place
But with you by my side
I changed my mind

You were like my big brother
So why did it end this way.

The blood that ran down
All those faces of sorrow
I cry every night for you.

Life is ironic
In it's cruel way.

You died because of him
The love you had for him
Your father figure who killed himself the year before

If I only told you the truth
Of who he truly was
How he tortured me
How killed so much of me

Then maybe you wouldn't have took it so hard
If only I was there a little bit
More maybe you would still be my side
These tears I wouldn't have to cry

Life is ironic
In it's cruel way.

That a death of one I hate
Caused the death of the one I loved.

[PLZ RATE AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND I WILL DO THE SAME FOR YOU]

Copyright ©2005 Georgina M

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emm

    You did well ... the ending I think was the best it sent the readers off wondering what happened next and if your doing ok! Goooood Job 7/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Heartless224eve

    It is a good poem i like it and it reaches out to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    This poem was very good and sad too. i hope you're feeling well. i think it doesn't really matter if they rhyme or not it just matter how you express them and it think you did a good job with it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Aw this is good, its v sad and meaningful. keep up the writing, and take care
    Polly

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