Aw this is good, its v sad and meaningful. keep up the writing, and take care
Polly

This poem was very good and sad too. i hope you're feeling well. i think it doesn't really matter if they rhyme or not it just matter how you express them and it think you did a good job with it.

It is a good poem i like it and it reaches out to me.

You did well ... the ending I think was the best it sent the readers off wondering what happened next and if your doing ok! Goooood Job 7/5