Holy crap! that is so crazy and sad! i don't really know what to say.

Holy crap! that is so crazy and sad! i don't really know what to say.

Wow that is really sad. but its good. very good.

Awesome/did that happen to be a friend

I liked this poem it was dark and showed alot of emotions throughout the whole thing. It flowed nicely but was hard to read because the structure was a bit out of place, if you put this into stanzas then this would be much easier to read, I liked it though. Well done ~mel

This was great your starting to make me like dark poems and i never thought that would happen lol 5/5