The ending was so sweet

"But you're the reason
I'm now standing among the betrayed"

i can relate with this one, great piece of work.

remember the text y e mailed to ckr? well i posted it with a different format, a little edited here
it's like very long so no one will comment on it hehe but i don't care

byee

ms. battery

This is a good poem
*** just an idea that might make it alittle better, you should consider finding other words for the word "betrayed" so that that word wont seem over used by the end line, because in my opion that line is so powerful and it could stand out more it you dont say "betrayed" so much before hand

you did a good job on this poem though

This a very good poem... a reader can really relate on this one and it has mixed emotions.......