Comments : Breathe (Gay Poem)

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    Ok, Im kinda sick of anti-gay ppl and their sterotypes on homosexuals. SO I did a poem saying when we can breathe the same air again instead of avoiding gays and such. So yah...

  • 18 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Michael

    Well Writ poem. I'm along with you man. I got your back. I liked the poem. It speaks the truth Well catch u later dude

    Mike

  • I really honestly did like this poem, I like ones that are different to others. I love the last Stanza, well done. I too hope there's a day when people will just accept that everyone is different. I respect you for being gay, because I know it must be so hard at times
    Keep strong xox

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I loved your poem. I think it really makes a statment and I completely agree. I have many homosexualy and bi friends and it pisses me off how people judge them. I comend you on this poem great job. I gave this poem a 5.

  • This is a very good poem and it looks that you accept your self for who you are and thats a good thing. keep up the great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Teresa

    This is very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I thouroghly enjoyed this poem, not only did it have a wonderful strong message but the word choice was perfect. It flowed from one line to the next in a brilliant form to provide even more power to the message. Congrats on a beautiful write and I hope one day we will all live in a world where tolerance is a requirement and people can be who they really are. Keep dreaming, keep smiling!
    -Kim

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    I love your poem!! it is amazing and brave
    I stand behind you all the way. You gave us a voice and gave us the strenght to beileve. Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    :nice I liked it..5/5.keep writing your a great writer...

    Xgay_prideX

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I REALLY LOVED IT!!! ALOT I HATE HOW THEY TREAT GAY PEOPLE LIKE THEY THINK THEY ARE MUTATED OR SOMETHING WHEN REALLY THEY ARE NOT THEY ARE HUMAN TOO SO KEEP YOUR HEAD HELD HIGH AND KEEP YOUR HEAD HELD HIGH!!!!!!!