Great job..i like your Flow and your words....Truly Great job
5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Very nice poem, i really like it. You did a great job with the rhyming and flow.

Lovely!!! simple but it didn't need complicating! keep up the writing amanda!

Your rhyming scheme is done very well, I like it that way, and the poem flows very well, I also like how I didn't need to try and figure out everything, the poem was already there.

Wow, this was beautiful! I love all of your poems...