by alive in death Jan 29, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Ruins, |
Thanx you guys. maybe one of the reasons it was so rough in flow to you, is because it was meant to be a song. |
by Kylead
I get the poem and i like it but for a less of a reader yur poem would not flow right but i liked it 4/5 it would be a 5/5 if flow wasnt so rough and thanx for the comment on mine |