That was so powerful and the ending was simply, WOW! Amazing write, I'm loving these dark poems, you're fantastic at them!

This Is Such A Gr8 Poem!! I Abslutly Luved It! And The Ending Is So Amazing!!
5/5

Black Benz coming down the block
Windows sporting a deep tint
Their world I am about to rock
Sun reflecting off my lens, a glint

GOOD LORD! WOW! Bill...I'm blown away..I know I know I say that all the time on your writes but this...WHOA!!!! That stanza aboved was perfect imagery! I saw the whole thing after that stanza, amazing job with that...That last line as well...great way to end it... a job well done!
With love
CHelsey-lynn

Huh, I wish I could find the words... but I'm afraid I can't. I'm truly speechless... Great poem Bill. Very unique! Always take care and... well, hugs!

Great ^^

I've read quite a bit of your poetry & I must say, you have strong imagery.

This is grat man well done you are truly talented.

I'm shivering from reading it, that's incredible, keep writing!
Luv Helen

Great job Bill........
u write so well.5/5
love to read ur poems dear

Bharti