Abandoning the Abandoned

by Katie   Jan 29, 2006


Have you ever seen concrete float?
Have you ever seen a solid rock drift?
Have you ever seen the backs
of everyone in the distance?
turning away
without looking back
to see your face
just watching
just seeing
your concrete support
your solid rock
float
drift
turn away

Or is it you?

floating
drifting
turning away
without looking back
to see all the faces
looking at you
just watching
just seeing
their concrete support
their solid rock
float
drift
turn away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Yes...this is amazing again. this makes me think about people who turn their backs on me. Great writing...hope to see more from you =)

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done! It's original and I love the way you laid this poem out and did the metaphors... Keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, so unique. This poem was amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    The style is very unique and it works well I think. Very creative

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow this is good i love the way you wrote
    it
    great job

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