Wow, this poem is so awsum! your words and structure are so unique. i loved it, you really made me question!
luv em

Wow this is good i love the way you wrote
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great job

The style is very unique and it works well I think. Very creative

Wow, so unique. This poem was amazing.

Nicely done! It's original and I love the way you laid this poem out and did the metaphors... Keep up the great work!

Yes...this is amazing again. this makes me think about people who turn their backs on me. Great writing...hope to see more from you =)