It's nice to see someone who is so sure that they are goin to change, and be themselves! well done on this poem!
luv em

Really good it is awesome

love always
tabby

I liked the message. A few of the lines rhymed but most didnt.. I dont know if thats what ya wanted or not just something I noticed. Overall it was good

I really liked this poem. It was really well done.

Nice job.. i really liked the way you put your feelings to words... keep it up hun!

sammie

Wow, I really liked this poem hun, it is well written, short, but still powerful and with a stong message. I especially liked your use of hindrance, not too many people know the word or can use it well and you did both beautifully. It also as a bit of positiveness to it which I like, a hope for a bringer future. I am glad you can see things in that way and I wish you nothing but the best!

-Tainted Mikochan

Awe. short but great nonetheless. i really enjoy your writing : ) nicely done.

I'll Say WOW! I liked this one a lot.

Gr8 poem,avery positive ending. well done.