I liked it, it gives good ideas on how the character is feeling. Good stuff.

I like this poem! You can tell you or some one is feeling!

I LOVE all of your poems! I saved ur profile to my favorites! Plz keep on writing...........

Again... AmAzInG, SwEeT, tRuE, BeAuTiFuL poem.

TaKe CaRE,,

LoTa LoVeN,,

T!FF@N!