Very nice.... i really liked this poem it was very creative and was very well written... keep it up

sammie

Well it's happy. pretty much.....I liked it. It was well organized.

Wow, that was great, storms are great

Very good poem. my friends have told me to write about spring time and rain a few times. i never get around to it. this is really good though =)

I cover my eats
I think you meant to write ears.. This is still a great poem.. I could never write a poem about nature.. But great write hun..

Hehehe, Don't know if it was meant to make people laugh, but I did... "I have survived"... Thats nice;)

Very wonderful poem and interesting keep up the good work!
Btw the poem was very neatly done..

-Josiah

Pretty good, you can still expand your word choice. Keep it up!

Great job. Even though it was something new you wrote about you were sure good at doing it. Keep up the great work.
~Juls~

You have a very innovated format of writing your thoughts. I don't know if I would necessarily consider it Novice because your words write books in my mind... Love it.

Very nice! i love storms. (as long as im inside) very nice flow, good rhyming. your mum should be proud.

Ruby

Nice i liked it a bit more a a happy poem than your others but still a grat job! yeah but this flowed well and created great images in my mind!!!!!!!!
ALLYxx

This was cool lol I hate storms lol there so scary :P But i loved this one aswell. Jeez im loving all your work =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x-x

This is really good! I loved it. You are very talented. 5/5** keep up the good work!

This was cool!! i liked it alot. well done, yet again!

much love and many kisses,
bex

Beautiful nature piece you have written here. Wonderful use of words and imagery. Well done *5/5*