by Gretchen
I think you meant the note youd left for me instead of not and I could go on forever instead of one. It was good sad but good |
This one kept my attention |
by Tammi
This is very sad and so full of love and pain I feel a tear in my eye keep it up 5/5 |
by Tammi
Thank u for ur comment on my poem "you make me shiver" it is all the truth but it was written for this girl I love not my husband sorry to confuse ppl. |
by †Undone♥
OKay, I am sure you dont want to hear this... but I am sorry for your loss. |
by Allison
That was awsome! You are such a great writer. *5/5* |
Very deep! Good poem and sorry for your loss even though it doesn't help much i am sure! But i am. may god be with you! |
by just a poet
This is one of the best poems i've read not just becasue of the talent but becasue of the feeling. i can feel the pain in everyword and i still cant stop crying which might be becasue i've read it like ten million times. i hope u get through this and find love or happiness again. i no u'll never stop loving him becasue well from ur words its obvious u'll never stop loving him but i hope u do learn to live without him. just one thing what do u think the reason it cuz from ur poem i kinda got 2 reasons. well i no me saying anything or nothing wont help at all but i reali hope u d get better. im with u all the way and here to talk if u want. stay string and take care and try to move on with ur life tho im never suggesting u forget him becasue i no u cant even if u wanted 2. |
Kept me entranced all the way through. Had to go back and read again, always do that with the ones I like. Great job ... heartfelt. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Omg this is ssooo sad but I like it, its really good. |
by *~vixen~*
This punches you right in the heart |
by hunter
Wow!!! this is a great poem... And I think I can relate... you have great talent and you are very good, so keep it up 5/5 |
by Lauren
Wow...this is amazing. it's so sad... |
Very emotional, beautifully written, keep up the good work. |
by veronicaaa
I dont get it was the person who wrote the letter a girl or boy abd was the person reading a boyfriend or girlfriend or bestfriend or sister or brother? pleeeease comment back i loved it and want to know |
by Goran Rahim
Wonderful poem, 5/5 |
Awww I so cried when I read this. This is the saddest thing I've ever read. Great great great job. |
by Driver
Wow... this left me stunned and speechless.. so much emotion, im touched.. well written, well composed.. overall a good job... keep em comin.. |
Very nice poem! I loved the words you used, and the flow was great! The topic was also a very good topic to write a poem about. Especially when it comes from experience. Great write! keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo |
by sarahAnn
Absolutely Amazing! |