One last time

by David Marshall   Jan 29, 2006


Just one last time,
...I want to see your face,
to feel your embrace.
Just one last time,
...I want to hear your voice,
to feel all rejoice.
Just one last time,
...To say I love you,
and that it was always true.
Just one last time,
...To be around you,
but now my heart's in two.
Just one last time,
...For you I'll cry,
I will always regret saying goodbye

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Wow..i can leave myself comments!!! how cool is that!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent work again... ! i love ur poems...i love sad poems... i added u to my favs last time.. i'll make sure i read more soon...
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Great poem... sounds like me, what I did to my last love... but, now we are back together. Thank goodness. It was a mess WITHOUT him!

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Another AMAZING AMAZING poem. loved it!

    TaKe CaRe,,

    LoTa LoVeN,,

    T!FF@N!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Liked this poem as well but I think you need to fix some things.

    "to feel all rejoice." I'm not sure why but something don't sound write when you say it and the other thing is

    "but now my hearts in two." sounded fine but didn't becuase you can't have two hearts maybe you should say: but now my heart is in two

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