Lovely poem emmy! keep up the good work! (sorry it's late night and I'm tired lol)

If you read comments on people's poems, you will have noticed how many times I have said the exact same thing, the format needs a little touch-ups here and there.

I don't know try any way you can to make it look neater, it is just easier to read that way and more enjoyable.

About the actual poem though, beyond the lines and at the words, the context is very good, this is a well-written poem.

Keep up the good work