I like this one alot tooo

This poem is wicked cool, its very metaphorical. i like metaphors and similes. theyre great to put in poems. also- i like the fact that you expressed the feeling of(what i see as) plain determination, with no care or regards to what happens around you, but in the end showed that you Do care. its really cool, the one thing i don't like is the lion thing... it doesn't fir, i think you could have used a better metaphor...

xoxo

Lauren