Wow. nice writing. ur very talented. keep it up. -k- |
by hm
Wow that was so deep and powerful great job loved it!and i hope you are okay take care keep shining.... |
The poem was ok, but i liked the idea of it more, good describing on exactly what smeone feels. |
Hey that was really good!!!=] |
Hey sry i left u in the chat my computer froze but my sn for aim is bmxpunk003 so if u get an aim sn talk to me on there later on and if not just comment me back on one of my poems so we can talk r something iight peace |
by britt
Thats a really good poem. |
by Bre
Hey it si bre and i really liked your poe it made me sad btu ti was a good poem. i love you buh bye! |
by pain is me
This is wonderfuly great |
by nadsyy
Awww sad....i lvoe it though, brilliant work...love dia mwaz xoxo |
Aww that poem is o sad ... much love for the poem--elmo |
by Cari Allen
Hey i talked to ya! and that was a good poem just dont ver let it come true! GOD LOVES YOU! |
Hey this was a really weird but awesome poem...and jus to let you know if i know where you lived i would come save you!!! plz don't die i know i dont know you but oh well!! well bye love ya even tho i dont know ya.... |
by Kaylalala
Wow those words were almost as deep as the cuts you described |
by gottaluvgod
Wow.. thas sad man |
by Sango
A sad vibe to this poem.... Truly sad... I don't know what else to say (type) |
by Sexi_Cassie
Well it's intense and all but i thought it was good i'm hoping that you don't do things like that because your a good writer and it be a horrible thing to lose someone with that kind of talent |
Very good an full of emotion... i like it... u shuld rite more |