Comments : My Parents

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Dedicted to your parent?
    In your poem you talk about your mother and father, but at the end you say dedicated to your parent.

    Your poems are not supposed to have curse words in them, but whatever this is a good poem.
    Yes, a lot of people, probably including me, take their parents for granted, there are -in fact- parents who are really bad, and have children so they can release stress by hurting their children, it is very sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Holli

    Very nice. Wish I had parents like yours. The only one I can semi-confide in is my father. Lovely poems, keep up the good work!! In school, must go now!! I will comment on the others later.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    Awww I liked this poem a lot. I actually do the same thing all the time. I get mad at my parents for something but then think how others have it so bad. I am very close to my parents and I tell them everything going on in my life. I really appreciate everything they do for me. Good job and good idea I should make one up to show how much I love my own parents.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    That was very HeartFelt..and Excellent job..your parents should be proud..and
    your message is very true..
    it happens to a lot
    and kids need to see..how great there parents really are for caring
    great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Awww that was sweet dedicating this poem to your parents very good job tho
    Take Care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Dis poem was nice and cool cuz u dedicated to ur parents and i kno how u feel great job! ^.^